Tolong buat ayat yang betul.

assalamualaikum dan selamat tengah malam to all readers. malam ni, badrul ingin berkongsi sesuatu dengan anda semua. lets roll !!

adik saya baru darjah 4. di sekolah tadi, cikgu BI dia suruh salin apa yang cikgu cakap. jadi, ini lah hasilnya.

          Azman , Darhan and Lagang were raise money. Day oneten to raise money for year classmate whose father just a way last a weet. The money is for boy to pay his school fees.
          
           The boys opene a car wash. Ol die school it whose atorery carwash. Day only opene it for a day. Day as die neighbours to paty sipen to patineighbours in dot'n niting money for the boy.
           Many never come and sent die car to the car wash. Azman , Darhan and Lagang wash the neber car. San, die friend also care to help dem wash the car.

          At the die day many to caleng RM200 day the money to the boy. He wash num dem taht he can pai his school fees.


itulah hasilnya. jadi, kepada pakar-pakar BI diluar sana, tolong ya.

2 comments:

- pemilik tinta hati - said...

Azman, Darhan and Lagang were raised money. They wanted to raise money for their classmate whose father just passed away last week. The money is for the boy to pay his school fees.

The boy opened a car wash. (Ol die school it whose atorery carwash - XPAHAM LA..huhu). They only opened it for a day. They asked their neighbours to (paty sipen to patineighbours in dot'n niting money for the boy.--> ?? XDAPAT TRANSLATE)

Many neighbours came and sent their cars to the car wash. Azman , Darhan and Lagang washed the neighbour's car. San, their friend also cared to help them washed the car.

At the end they mananged to challenge RM200 (day the money to the boy). He washed (num dem) that he can pay his school fees.

* Salam..saja cuba betulkan mengikut apa yang saya dapat paham. Yang dalam kurungan saya tak dapat nk jelaskan sbb xphm ayat tu..Huhu..Sekadar mencuba bi yang dah lama tinggal. Sila betulkan jika salah.

Badrul said...

diba !
thankz ye.
sekurang2nya awk boleh btul kan ckit2.
sy pham gak ape yg adek sy tulis ni.
tp. otak blur trus !
btw, thankz for reading ye.